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Monday, November 27, 2006

Epilogue

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Since many of you (almost everyone) complained that I had not "finished" the story (I had) I've decided to write a short epilogue. I've also compiled the stories in this blog.
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Wind swept across the blackened plain, creating a whistling sound not unlike those found in old Western movies. The area was barren. Ash covered everything. Pieces of metal stuck out of the ground like twisted knives. Apart from the wind, there was one other noise. A lone figure sat curled up like a child, uttering two words continuously. "Goldfish killer...goldfish killer..."

9 Comments:

Comments Blogger Tim said...

Hee... I suppose we were complaining a little...

But in fairness, a lot of times when you do something like that, you also make another chapter in which the hero escapes by random/weird means. That's what most of us were expecting...

6:57 PM, November 27, 2006

 
Comments Blogger Sam Austin said...

wonderful.

i wasn't expecting him to live, it just didn't feel conclusive. i thought when the voice spoke that that meant that the bomb didn't work, but instead just made someone talk.

...or something.

3:50 PM, November 28, 2006

 
Comments Anonymous Anonymous said...

uhh sure.

4:39 PM, November 28, 2006

 
Comments Anonymous Anonymous said...

perfect. i'm very proud of you. and yes, we were complaining...a lot... but now you have a wonderful ending!

8:41 PM, November 28, 2006

 
Comments Blogger Tim said...

The posts on the other blog are not in order...

3:50 PM, November 29, 2006

 
Comments Anonymous Anonymous said...

FRANKS 2000 INCH TV

11:36 AM, December 03, 2006

 
Comments Anonymous Anonymous said...

etadpu.

7:09 PM, December 03, 2006

 
Comments Blogger Raptor said...

It's been a week. Would you please* be so kind as to update?

*note the use of the word 'please'

4:14 PM, December 04, 2006

 
Comments Blogger Sam Austin said...

take your time, we know you're busy. all of us. some just forget every once in a while.

5:23 PM, December 04, 2006

 

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